A Woman In Love Poem by Akhtar Jawad

A Woman In Love

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Leave me alone,
On the bank of this river,
I know,
Many miles behind,
She is sitting on the bank,
Of this lovely river,
Her feet is dip,
In the water so cold,
But warm at this place,
She knows it well,
Someone needs it,
To feel the touch,
Of her soft white feet,
She is washing her hands,
She is washing her face,
Cause she knows,
Someone needs,
More excitements,
The water is warmer.

Let me be excited.
But I miss something,
The naughty winds,
Heard my heart,
And suddenly I found,
The water too warm,
What happened at that bank?
Oh love! Go to hell!
The wind regrets,
Her naught of the moment,
She jumped in the river,
A complete mystery,
Is a woman in love!

(It is just an imagination to describe that a woman in love can go up to any extent.)

Wednesday, October 1, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: woman
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A woman is always a mystery but when is in love she is most mysterious creature of the universe. Always expect unexpected behavior from her.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khalida Bano Ali 01 October 2014

A nice imagery, yes a woman can go to any extent, if she is in love.

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Valsa George 01 October 2014

Even a man in love turns mysterious in his behaviour Akhtarji.....! But jumping into the river..... Is it not a bit risky! She should have thought of her safety....! Enjoyed!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 01 October 2014

love got many faces yet all resembles to peace '' love is not about finding the right person but creating a right relationship ..thank you

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Melvina Germain 01 August 2015

Hmmm certainly gives one food for thought as to how mysterious women become while in love. Excellent poem Akhtar.....

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Geetha Jayakumar 09 October 2014

A beautiful poem, a woman in love can go to any extent, even at the cost of her life, by jumping into the river. Beautiful imagery of words played. Loved reading it.

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Salini Nair 07 October 2014

beautiful poem on the mysterious love of a women.........................nice

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Chuy Amante 04 October 2014

Very nice her feet dipped in *sounds better

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Heather Wilkins 03 October 2014

a complete mystery is a woman in love sometimes very foolish

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