Jahan zaib

Rookie - 94 Points (February 05,1981 / Malakand Pakistan)

A Wish For All The Youngs - Poem by Jahan zaib

Wake up with the song of birds,
Run before the big star runs,
Get your things in time done,
So you have some time for fun,
You will always have fresh face,
Thus you will win every race,
Go to read and learn to lead,
Fulfill every needy's need,
You, the hope of Mama's eye,
Papa's wish, you rise high,
Teachers want you make them proud,
That's my picture he says loud,


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Dedicated to all young children

Comments about A Wish For All The Youngs by Jahan zaib

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (5/12/2013 2:48:00 PM)

    Point to be ponder...yes if not only children, youngsters too start to do so they would conquer the world at some extent...cute dedication, lovely poem (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,282 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (12/12/2012 6:33:00 PM)

    great poem Jahan......... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,957 Points * Sunprincess * (12/12/2012 8:30:00 AM)

    oh this is so cute and a nice dedication..little children are
    the hopes and dreams of tomorrow.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 139 Points Raihana Abdul Jabbar (11/3/2012 10:41:00 AM)

    Point Taken! .. Very cute poem..Great rhymes.. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,936 Points Dave Walker (10/24/2012 11:18:00 AM)

    A fantastic poem with a wonderful flow. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 24, 2012



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