A Winter Haiku Poem by Sunil Uniyal
A Winter Haiku
Rating: ★2.7
lost in the fog ~
an old man in the street
chanting 'Ram, Ram'.
Thursday, January 3, 2008
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Leah Nunya
03 January 2008
this is not a haiku. your syllable pattern is 4-6-4 a haiku syllable pattern is 5-7-5 smart one. learn poetry before you write it cuz it makes you look stupid.
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4/18/2024 4:56:15 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Though strictly not conforming to the form, a nice short verse deserving appreciation!