A Wind Swept Day Dedicated To Afzal Shauq /Heather Wilkins Poem by Afzal Shauq

A Wind Swept Day Dedicated To Afzal Shauq /Heather Wilkins

Rating: 4.9


As I pen my thoughts,
and dreams,
Words I cannot say,
I bear my heart to the
wind,
On a wind swept day.

May I take a dream, or
two,
My dreams involving you.
Blow them to the wind,
Make my dreams come
true.

I bear my heart to the
wind,
On a balmy day,
May it catch on fire,
And blow your love,
my way.



HEATHER WILKINS
© Heather Burns

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ishita Mehta 30 May 2009

splendid indeed loved the line 'blow them to the wind, make my dreams come true' though all dreams do not come true but i hope this particular ones come.. a 10++++++++

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Lady Grace 03 June 2009

this is a beautiful dedication to the author..cheers..grace

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Anjali Sinha 07 June 2009

a lovely dedication by heather -10 anjali

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a beautiful and hertfelt poem..well done..10++++

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Zeinab Sherif 20 June 2009

afzal, this poem is..is.....is wonderful, ok, tell me how many mind do u have for all of this different ideas&topics? 10+++++++++++++++++++++

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Gabina (gabby) Gomez 11 April 2010

and dreams, Words I cannot say, I bear my heart to the wind, On a wind swept day. THis peice right here is what i adore thy more. its out going in a deam and how it seems thAT a heart that beard in the wind.. its very much like reality.

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Ezna Stephna 08 November 2009

A very inspiring poem that blow my love in the wind, where you may feel...... it is the reality of life......keep up your writing and share your thoughts always.....10x10

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Liezel Van Zyl 29 July 2009

Hey Afzal. I like the way you write. The way you talk about your thoughts that must carried by the wind is different, It would be nice to read something that you write about nature, will be exciting to see how you play with words as in this one. congrats, I really love it :)

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Arlette Murillo 27 July 2009

A very inspiring poem. I really like the way you write. 'blow them to the wind, make my dreams come true', that I would say is my gavorite line. Your writing capacity is very good, exc ellent actually. I'ver read some of the other poems and I really like your variations of topics and everything. Keep on the excellent work! ! !

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Kayla Lines 22 July 2009

the simplicity of the words convey that you as a poet do not need to use uneeded unnecessary words to get your emotions across

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