A Whisper Poem by Lento Maez

A Whisper

Rating: 5.0


I thought I heard a whisper in the breeze
It seemed to say stay with me please
It sounded so soft and peaceful
I couldn't help but fall to my knees

I searched for the source of the whisper
Foolishly I thought it was by a tall fir
Time seemed to move like a blur

As I went to a wonderful large tree
My eyes could not focus to see

A wisteria wrapped around it

Teasing me with its essence of you

Thursday, September 4, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 12 September 2014

Lovely poem, romantic and very imaginative.

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Akhtar Jawad 04 September 2014

Probably it was your heart that whispered. Nice write.

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Heather Wilkins 04 September 2014

a nice poem with a soft touch good imagery

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