A Weed......Honesty Poem by ritty patnaik

A Weed......Honesty



a weed amongst weeds
honesty, to you i do plead
show yourself to me,
one more time,
in your pristine beauty
of bright translucent white
a adorable name,
for a weed so hidden
amongst natures
wooden bristle beauty.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ejaz Khan 30 December 2009

To see beauty and blessings inherent in weeds is innovative, very meaningful write, ritty!

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Raj Nandy 26 December 2009

A thought provoking poem! A weed does retain its pristine beauty, - and beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder! Honesty is practised in this material world as the best policy! An honest man is one-eyed in the kingdom of the blind! Only a poet's eye can spot a flower in the poppy blossom! For the world at large poppy is just a narcotic - bringing great wealth in the black market of drugs! Your short poem has provoked these thoughts! Thanks Ritty! 10! -Raj

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Milica Franchi De Luri 25 December 2009

lovely poem ritty............

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