... A Waste Of Time......(Dark) Poem by Eyan Desir

... A Waste Of Time......(Dark)

Rating: 3.2


My rose has walked away
I feel the same, after a new day
I'm fuel by uncontrollable rage
It's frustrating living this life
Angry with myself for falling in
Your juice of unfaithfulness
Turned a sweet loving heart
Blacker than dirty tar!
You spat twisted lies in my life
It was you, that murdered
My ability to love and trust murderer!


Months and years the pain can't subside
Bitter memories are the scars
Impossible to wash away
They haunt by day and comfort at night
Why must hearts fall in love?
If it's not forever
It's a waste of time!


August 2nd 2009
Thank you for reading

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lady Grace 03 August 2009

you are right...why waste your time in waiting and remembering those past of yours...hmmmm..try to forget, let the past be the lesson for today and the future... your poem is nicely done..

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Uriah Hamilton 03 August 2009

Very dark but it often feels this way.

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Shekhar Joshi 05 August 2009

nicely written.........sad......maybe u are right about the waste of time thing.......... excellent work

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Little Hatila ;) 09 August 2009

'Why must a heart fall in love? If it's not forever It's a waste of time! ' so sad but unfortunately it happens between now and then...i do agree with you, i don't believe in love if it is not forever love....10 Hataw

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Kranthi Pothineni 09 August 2009

Friend, there is nothing waste in life. Some unpleasant events happen only to transform us to something new and hopefully better. Expressive write.

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Marieta Maglas 02 July 2010

A nice poem which reveals again the beauty of your HEART

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rago rago 06 October 2009

waste of time.....life in itself is waste of time........but a rich content and rich in sense.........nicely written..........

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Js Black 16 September 2009

While love can be a many splintered thing, I'm not sure it can ever be a waste of time. Keep the faith! Excellent job and keep of the good work...Jeff.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 14 August 2009

why must a heart love if it not for ever.....a painful question a painful situation for any one....10

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Miriam Maia Padua 13 August 2009

very good and positive thoughts of moving on... very directing write towards forgetting and accepting things though it hurts.. strong title..Waste of time..very true.. crying and wanting over lost love is just crying over spilled milk..'why cry? ' strong message for those who are heart broken i love this, my friend.. 10+++ lovelots, Maia

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