A Walmart Parking Lot Poem by connie crane

A Walmart Parking Lot

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To laugh at life
You have to have,
A perpetual sense of humor.

If you laugh,
They say,
The life you live,
Will potentially,
Last much longer.

I am sitting in the dark,
Stranded,
In a Walmart parking lot,
And finding it,
Hard to laugh.

I cannot see the humor in,
My current situation.
I am desperately in need,
Of some comic revelation.

Then suddenly,
It dawns on me.
And I can see,
My poetry,
Is witty confirmation.

With words and rhyme,
I laugh at me,
And thus embrace,
Salvation.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Connetta jean VanMatre 11 March 2009

That's what i say too..when all is going bad.pray..then laugh and reach for the notebook and pen...(i've had to use anything i can find to write on, just to write it down and get the poem off my back) ........you made me smile.

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James B. Earley 17 July 2008

To laugh at self....is comedic relief....in its finest hour! Excellent.

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Ron Flowers 12 July 2008

Very good. It just goes to show you that things are rarely as bad as they seem. Ron

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This is a really fine and typical American poem. A feeling of grandiosity together with solitude. At Walmart's one buys on favourable terms as well.

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