(20.08.1987)

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A Walkman

Somebody goes on way in light,
He takes his heart inside a bag,
He needs no lie, no stupid fight,
He is one`s love, has wings on back.
He is a man or maybe not,
We see another world in mind.
The sun is shining, it is hot,
He walks to us and is so kind.
He knows the truth about world.
He looks with big and clear eyes,
He is the light like prophets told,
His thoughts God`s massage symbolize.
He brings his love in open hands
To people who believe in him,
He is a friend and kindness sends
Those persons who in tears swim.
We`re full of loneliness and pain,
And always think about flesh,
And our dreams for us are main
If even they are full of trash.
The walkman goes to meet a fear
Of darkness, death and other things.
We cannot see him but he`s near,
It is for us salvation means.
We live in noise and have no time
To see each other every day.
He helps to bloom us like a lime,
Don`t mind whatever people say.
He helps believe in our dream,
To reach it when we don`t know way.
He is for us a water stream,
When we in desert heartless stay.

Submitted: Monday, February 27, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, February 28, 2012


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  • Ngaka Motaung (3/5/2012 8:08:00 AM)

    A superb magnificent poem! You're brilliant!

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  • Kaia Grønnbæck (3/5/2012 12:51:00 AM)

    A lovely poem. Beautifully written!

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  • Sagar Shelar (2/28/2012 1:22:00 PM)

    Very strange kind of poem. A walkman...... who is he?

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  • Harindhar Reddy (2/28/2012 10:46:00 AM)

    hugger-mugger! hush-hush! I know he is an angel in you, in me. I also he is a spirit in you and in me and you and me. Further there in everyone... What's start to the poem..
    Somebody goes on way in light,
    He takes his heart inside a bag,

    Yippee! I am always intrigued by your benevolent thoughts to help others - simply superb!

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  • Wahab Abdul (2/28/2012 7:22:00 AM)

    Good rhyme and good flow make the poem an exquisite piece of poem, i like it and am giving you 100/100. Keep sharing with us such kind of beautiful poems.

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