A Walk Poem by Mike Barrett

A Walk

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I
Walked
Along
The ocean shore
Upon
Convoluted sands,
Amid
Weakened rocks.

Atop
A huge
And weathered stone
I quietly observed
As new spawned waves
Were born
And then
Matured and died.

Silently
I stood
As they
Amassed, rose,
Curved and broke
In thunderous tortured roar!

Below,
I watched
As helpless grains of sand
Rushed aimless
To and fro -
Perceived
The parallels
To life itself -
Then grew afraid!


© M. Barrett – all rights reserved

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem was written in August 1961. Prior to writing it, I had visited the small New Brunswick town of St. Martins which sits directly on the shore of the Bay of Fundy. It was a bit of a windy day that day and the waves were somewhat higher than normal. I enjoyed the day there but was struck at how helpless the grains of sand were against the force of the tide and the waves. Later upon reflecting on how the moon, the earth, and the silent orbital motion of each create the tides, these words came out.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mike Barrett 26 October 2014

Hi Valsa, Thanks for your input - it's for sure you captured the exactness of the truth intended to be conveyed through these words. You'll note I revisited this same poem many years later and made a single change, solely in the ending. The difference can be explained as the insight gained through a lifetime.....in essence everything is always unfolding exactly as it should and there is comfort gained when one integrates this insight into one's beingness. Cheers!

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Valsa George 26 October 2014

On one side the billows battering on the rocks and getting pulverized into droplets and misty vapour.... a symbol of strength! On the other side the grains of sand driven of their base by the tides.... a sign of helplessness! Between these opposites, life is a balancing game, I feel! Really enjoyed this beautiful poem!

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