A Vacuum Of Dreams! Poem by abhilash fraizer

A Vacuum Of Dreams!

Rating: 2.6


The playground is forlorn
The player a grieving loner,
Games were battles; they decided my fate!
One after another, every defeat
Were stepping stones to vacuum!

Life, with its broken garlands
And glasses drained out of love,
Once again comes to welcome me
And wish me good morning,
Mornings are always good, I say!

Alone in the tower of dreams
Against the vast, vast horizon
Overcast with clouds of words,
Weaving the dream I have loved ever
Waiting for the shower I have loved ever...!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 13 February 2010

Weaving the dream I have loved ever Waiting for the shower I have loved ever...! Outstanding poetic skills displayed here.10./10 again. Do read my Stiletto-Tanka page-2 poem-38.

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young writer Athira 30 November 2009

hey just superb...........10/10

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