Rhiannon blackbird

Rookie - 2 Points (October 1,1998)

A Universe So Far Away - Poem by Rhiannon blackbird

A tear, a life caught in time,
A soul, pondering in forever woe,
A love, once found now is lost,
A bond, so strong was destroyed by greed,

A trust, depended on shall now be deceived
A land, so beautifull burning in heed,
A race, mankind once warned for so long,
A people, ignorant and foolish kept with there ways,

A world, will never see darker days,
A light, brought hope 'twas called the sun is forever to be shunned,
A system, bound in solar ties spoiled now by much too lies,
A serenity, a peace that man once knew buried by a sorrow filled blue.

Comments about A Universe So Far Away by Rhiannon blackbird

  • Rookie - 2 Points Rhiannon Bender (7/12/2013 9:10:00 PM)

    :) Thanks, it means a lot. this particular poem actually won me first place in my eight grade poetry contest. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Lucy Bren'ee (5/8/2013 6:21:00 PM)

    really awesome! i like your poem a lot. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 8, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 17, 2013

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