A Tree In A Barren Soil Poem by Rose Rose

A Tree In A Barren Soil

Rating: 4.8


I'm a tree in a barren soil,
Shedding its leaves as tears
I cannot grow more here,
Under the scorching hatredness
Of many a shining sun above me
I'm so scared to live here
Soon I'll be falling in to the hands
Of this parched land,
Leaving all my dreams and hopes'
Where I may sleep like a dead wood
But my soul will wake up like an angel
In an eternal world of love and peace
with her stretched wings
Where I'll not shed my feathers as tears!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 09 January 2012

A really beautiful poem, really liked it. May i invite you to read my new poem called, A Window Of Time 3.

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Saadat Tahir 14 January 2012

touching and painful litany of expatriate life great lines :) cheers

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Ency Bearis 14 January 2012

good poem, nicely written

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Subodh Pandey 10 January 2012

nicely portrayed poem. a beautiful read rose.

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Sajna Kailas 10 January 2012

very well written Rose, as a fine Rose in fresh bloom! ! ! keep it up! !

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Vipins Puthooran 10 January 2012

It's a beautifulllll poem, , , , , showing the deep sadness of your life! ! ! ! ! top marks! ! ! ! !

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