A Toy Story Poem by Han Min Ohn

A Toy Story



Sometimes I feel like I am just a toy
Being played by people who are not a child

They pick me up and play when they are in mood
They just ignore me when I am of no use

Sometimes they make me act like a prince of old
At other times I am just an ordinary Joe

In the morning I may be a hero saving the day
When afternoon arrives, villain is the role I play

They treat me like I don't have a feel
Like a toy in which tear is just mystery

They also make me express their thoughts
Sometimes they may even borrow my sword

From this life so much I want to escape
But like a toy, my own limbs I can't shake

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 03 August 2012

The work has smooth, fluxive structural movement...Your employment of couplet stanzaic construction works well here...Well Done, Han! ~FjR~

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