A Tough Love Poem by Ashley Castleberry
A Tough Love
My love for you is a tough love,
A love hard to handle.
Emotions are loose,
Running wild.
My heart is whole,
Sometimes breaking.
Smiling, the I cry
At the dropp of a dime.
Frustrations over come me,
Destroying my optimism.
It is not you
That keeps me from happiness.
Others' involvement,
Overwhelming.
Against their wishes,
Is our love.
Our seperation,
Slowly breaking me.
Our love is a tough love,
A love hard to handle.
My heart, the love...broken
Slowly leaves me choking.
I couldn't help but thinking of someone I know while reading this. Good job.
Ash, That's a really sweet, really sad poem girlfriend. You're good at writing out your thoughts...I remember when you'd throw them all at me in notes in 8th and 9th grades! hehehe...ancient history I know. Love ya girl, see ya in a little bit.
Wow babe. You pretty much just summed up your life for the last three months into about 20 lines. This poem is great! I LOVE YOU!
this poem is great.. i really like the style and flow of the poem. i would really like to know what you think of my poems
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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You use some very powerful images, Ashley. This poem allows you to feel bad for the narrator and share her frustration at being apart from the one she loves. Nice job.