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A Time At The Beach

Why not long walks on the beach
Whispering sweet nothings to each
Walking bare foot in the sand
Walking together hand in hand
Watching the waves come crashing in
Feeling the dampness on my skin
Feeling the gentle breeze on my face
One of god's beauties, what a wonderful place
Looking up towards all the stars
On this magic night, this will be all ours
Love the ocean once in a while
Forgetting your problems and making you smile!

Submitted: Saturday, November 26, 2005
Edited: Saturday, November 26, 2005


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  • Ruby Honeytip (11/23/2012 9:16:00 PM)

    I live right on the beach. This poem is just so beautifully real. Thank you for sharing: ^)

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  • Mark Dillon (11/9/2012 8:19:00 AM)

    A great special place, lovely poem.

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  • Dee Daffodil (6/26/2006 10:19:00 AM)

    Donna...Love this poem. I really love the Ocean, as I grew up about five minutes drive from it...so when I relocated, I really missed it. To date, I still try to get back for vacations. If I need to heal, or rest, it's my favorite place...it gives me energy.
    Hugs,
    Dee

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  • RAY LUCERO (12/1/2005 10:32:00 AM)

    Donna,

    You share your romantic nature/longing...nice.

    Ray

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