A Thought Of You Poem by Alfredo Jacques

A Thought Of You

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A thought of you
Brings happiness to my soul.
I close my eyes to paint you
In my dreams, but
I am sadden knowing,
I will never hug you or
Hold you.
We are worlds apart and
In two different times.
I know you would draw me the world
or write my happiness, if I asked.
You live in the land
Of The cross forest, a sacred land
For our sacred friendship,
I may never meet you
But
I’m forever yours.



COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gerry Vehd 27 November 2006

Very beautiful.... There is no distance for the Love! Keep smiling! Gerry

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Kihindei Adai 30 November 2006

That's deep... it's beautifully written and it made me think. you could have been talking about the love of your dreams, the country of your ancestors or a spirit guide. very powerful write.

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Suzan Gumush 04 December 2006

A beautiful write. I like the flow of your pen. Best wishes suzan

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Nouri Black 05 December 2006

ooooooo i love it so much...its really wow.. keep it up dear

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Ashish R 22 December 2006

Beautiful poem.Touched my heart. Ashish.

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Martina Danielova 03 December 2013

lovely...how we feel our soulmates or how our desire to love or being loved is beyond existence. The will is the creator of our existence and reality.

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Melissa Masiza 26 March 2008

'I close my eyes to paint you'.. beautiful! I see what you meant.

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Winsy Ng 22 August 2007

'i know your would draw me the world and write me happiness' exquisite line thanks for the encouraging comments! i'm still a beginner so that is very much appreciated!

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Phats Li 06 August 2007

this is a wonderful poem! ! ..thank you for sharing

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Annamaria Jara 07 May 2007

Loved it. Very well written Alfredo.

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