A Thought Poem by Gordon D Wilkinson

A Thought

Rating: 4.9


I can see but am not there
Here so close to the suns glare
Deep in the mists of the galaxy
Weightless to infinity
Just a thought roaming about far
Bouncing from star to star
Alighting here and there
Infiltrating with care
Then blown back onto the winds hand
Travelling from land to land
Just a thought
Coming to nought
A thought

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark R Slaughter 29 March 2009

But sometimes coming to much! Great metaphors Gordon. Mark

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Indira Renganathan 19 March 2009

A wavering thought always towards a nought..nice write

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Pensive Phoenix 14 March 2009

Really good poem. Great imagery and tone. I'd give this a 10.

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annie okia 10 March 2009

Love this, feels like daydreaming.........my favourite state. alana

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Stephen Stirk 02 March 2009

Hi Gord This is one of your best ever poems. I like the imagery and the mysticism within it. It seems that 'Love Poems', are not the only area in which your talent blossoms.. Steve

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