A Thou$and Apolog! E$ Poem by tanvi damle
A Thou$and Apolog! E$
I was too busy doing what i wanted to,
I had no time to notice you.
In a hurry, i use to rush by,
always failing to notice a small tear trickling down your eye.
It was 12am and i still hadn't come home,
you kept trying my cell just to get a busy tone.
When i came back, 'leave me alone' was all i said,
and slammed my bedroom door and went straight to bed
I never bothered to apologise after any of our fight,
& slept soundly while you cried all night.
When i used to come back from college, you always asked me how was my day,
just to see me give a shrug and walk away.
I never noticed the smile you used to fake,
and i never saw any of your tears, your heartbreaks.
I know what i did was alot more than just a mistake,
but to make it right I'll do whatever it takes.
I wish that i could find a less cliche word for sorry,
all i want right now is for you to forgive me.
I know i never did the things you wanted me to,
but I'll spend the rest of my life making it up to you.
-Dedicated to 'my parents'
I know how this realisation makes you feel; You think under the pressure you will reel. But little one, you made it up to them without knowing how to; The cliched word sorry has immense power to things undo.
suggestion: you always asked me how was my day, = you always asked me how my day was, the contents are the emotion from the experience of every man. neatly penned 10
whoo tanvi this is like the wonderful things that i read all day whooo it made my day whoooooooo again i like love it whoo congrat
so honest, a situation we've all been through im sure your parents will love your emotion =) 10
A very good realization after all...forgive and forget, that's all it takes. Fantastic!
yeah, i understand... wonderfully put. its honest. felt really good reading this. it is very difficult to admit mistakes. it was courageous. 'I wish that i could find a less cliche word for sorry' yea, have felt that. thank you for a wonderful poem.
yeah, i understand... wonderfully put. its honest. felt really good reading this. it is very difficult to admit mistakes. it was courageous. 'I wish that i could find a less cliche word for sorry' yea, have felt that. thank you for a wonderful poem.
this very typical adoloscent behaviour pattern...and we learn a great deal from it if only we internalise the process and that's what you just did. i love to read poetry written by youngsters...keep writing dear young poet...my son is also born the same year, same month!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/21/2024 3:51:56 AM # 1.0.0.1119
sweet and very meaningful and written professionally..loved it as i like your poems which being written in a good and heart touching way..well done..10/10