A Tender Moment At The Supermarket Poem by Mary Nagy

A Tender Moment At The Supermarket



Sitting there watching them
they had no idea
they were such an inspiration
so comfortable with eachother.

He, at least 85
she, about the same.
From my car I could see
the way he worried about her
as he pulled his car up to the door
so she wouldn't get wet.
He tenderly watched
while she tucked her hair
under her clear rain bonnet.

The rain was barely a trickle
but it was a cold rain
and he wouldn't have her
catching a chill.
She waited
just inside the door
while he parked the car
a sky blue 1976 Bonneville.
They probably bought it
brand new.

His steps were slow
and purposeful.
I could tell he hurt
but was trying to still
be the ''protector''
of his beautiful bride.

They walked into the store
arm in arm
while I sat for a few more minutes
alone in my car
listening to the whish-whish
of my wipers.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Shepherd 16 January 2006

So perfectly expressed, so perfectly rounded off - the compassion of the open heart. Supersized thanks!

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Ernestine Northover 16 January 2006

Hi Mary, Yep, delightful. Loved every line. Beautifully written with such understanding and feeling for them. Thanks. Love Ernestine XXX

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Josette Reeves 21 January 2006

This is just wonderful Mary, beautiful and tender xx

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Duncan Wyllie 22 January 2006

Dear Mary I could picture the scene, and feel the meaning! You're A Star. Thankyou Love Duncan

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Lori Boulard 23 January 2006

It's raining this morning as I read this, and my mood just went up about twenty notches. This is beautiful, Mary!

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Alison Cassidy 22 November 2008

You see the world through a poet's eyes Mary and express with great eloquence and simplicity that comfortable love which lasts till death us do part. Beautiful penning. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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James B. Earley 26 June 2008

Ah the power of observations! A passionate composition.

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Lily Espinosa 02 November 2007

This is an absoultely wonderful poem. Beautifully sad.

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Sid John Gardner. 12 May 2007

Mary your observation on this occasion was excellent.A good composition that took us through a snapshot of everyday life.Very well done. All the best Sid John.

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Willow Moon Pearce 03 March 2006

Very tender and moving Mary, thanks...............willow

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