A Temptress Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

A Temptress

Rating: 5.0


I passed by you once
Our eyes met by chance
You asked why I stared
You are sexy I bared

You seemed mystified
Smile you got satisfied
It signals to lit an ember
Of romance colored amber

Since then you always glide
Like a bird in heat on the ride
You always talk sexy on the side
I too become arouse I must confide

Men like me though committed
Are weak to seduction submitted
So please excites me more my dear
It is an elixir as many guys would swear

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 08 May 2008

Interesting and risque! Like it! HG; -) xx

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 08 May 2008

Sounds like a sweet Temptation to me, one look sparks the fires of Creativity... Andrew 10

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Duncan Wyllie 22 May 2008

I think that it was Oscar Wilde who said that, 'I can resist everything but temptation. Ummm, My advice would be to steer well clear when you can Love duncan X

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Jurietta Duraan 21 May 2008

True.... even though you are committed, you like to be tempted... very nice poem, Marvin.

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Sadiqullah Khan 21 May 2008

it is an elixir most guys would swear, , , , nice lines and good poem

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S... Che 21 May 2008

this poem is on my favourite. Very well written. Thanks for sharing

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this is the real -pilipino sweetness....love it

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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