A Tear Of Sadwater Blue Poem by Alandra Nicole Moreira

A Tear Of Sadwater Blue

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A night of wonderous gloom
The clock tick 12, a midnight noon
A girl in the room is wide awake
Gets out of bed, she trembles and shakes
Outside as she looks to the glistening moon
Suddenly something feels wet against her cheek
She moves her hand to wipe away a tear
So mild, so meek, yet stronger than weak
She release the rain that she's held inside
That has punctured through her subtle cloud
A vision dreamed, but crowned by doubt
The clock strikes one
She hears footsteps behind her
Feels a hand on her shoulder
Now someone holds her
When she turns around to see him
Just a vision of what was or what wil be
She does not know
But right now he is just an image
That she longs for
An image of what she had, lost and regains
And that image gave her the most subtle hope
So slowly, as the clock struck two
She fell asleep, dreaming of him
Happiness in dream underneath the moon
But still from beneath her sleeping eye
A tear of minded gloom
A tear of sadwater blue

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Clesec Swahn 06 December 2009

Beautiful poem. Simply beautiful.

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Afzal Shauq 24 July 2009

That she longs for An image of what she had, lost and regains And that image gave her the most subtle hope So slowly, as the clock struck two She fell asleep, dreaming of him Happiness in dream underneath the moon what a sweet poem with such type of above verses, , , meaningful enogh and the way you done is very interesting and soul clicking... really like your way of writing..well done dear poetry friend..liked it very much..romantic...

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She fell asleep, dreaming of him Happiness in dream underneath the moon But still from beneath her sleeping eye A tear of minded gloom A tear of sadwater blue beautiful imagination of dreaming him.. classic poem i must say.. what an urge from within...10 read mine... cry not... miss i miss...anwherey

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