Treasure Island

Andrea Dietrich


A Tale of Fire and Ice


Part I: Ice

He shines like silver midnight moon -
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  • Charles Monroe (10/29/2013 1:43:00 PM)

    'Top One-Hundred Poets Club'
    Out of Thousands and thousands of Poems online
    Mine was number sixty-five.
    Poet with a Thousand Kills
    But with weak promotion skills.
    Poem Hunters lose their way
    And, at times, become the prey
    All is fair in War and Love
    Top One-Hundred Poets Club.
    All contestants orchestrated
    Or perhaps they're all related
    Smiling proud with Pen in Hand
    We remain the Underrated.
    It will take a thousand Poets
    Just to help you stay afloat
    But nothing beats the satisfaction
    To receive an honest Vote.
    Poem Hunts the lamest Ducks
    I Searched You a thousand bucks
    Poison Ink reigns from above
    Top One-hundred Poets Club

    P.X

    #65 Charles Monroe


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  • Dr Tapan Kumar Pradhan (10/17/2013 10:57:00 PM)

    Dear Andrea, yours is one of the better poems I saw in the entire contest. Your poem reminded me of the style employed by Terry O'Leary in his poem The Stone. You have a definite natural talent. You may actually win a prize! ! ! Wish you all the best for the contest. But you cannot predict anything in an Online Contest like this - which can be easily manipulated by cyber savvy poets! ! (See my poem Poem Hunter Contest Final just to have an idea of how a contest can be manipulated...) (Report) Reply

  • Bri Edwards (9/26/2013 4:01:00 PM)

    i like it! i give it a very good score. intriguing story. i just noticed HOW good the rhyming is (i've been reading poems while talking on the phone!)
    i just read it again. now i'll give it excellent. :) thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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