# #a Survival Plan Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
# #a Survival Plan
[the concept of this write stolen from one of
jakki vasudev's story]
a group of farmers
went to god the creator
asking for a reform in nature
the right thing at the wrong time
that's what you do they say
a drought when we need rain
a pouring rain which does not give us gain
a flood to wash away our grains
give us the power
to handle nature
we do know better
god obliged without an utter
after tilling and sowing
almost like a drip irrigation
the rain was made to fall on
the growth was encouraging
the rain was stopped
when not needed
the field was a lovely green
sparkling in the beautiful sunshine
we will reap the benefits
when we harvest...thought the farmers
a mild breeze to take away the heat
uprooted a part of the cultivation
is it a trick god is playing on us
the farmers thought..examined the uprooted
roots were short
grains not too many
god owed an explanation
'see i give a drought for the root to grow
deep inside to find its resources
the growth of the root stabilizes the plant'
MINE WAS A SURVIVAL PLAN
YOU WANTED AN IMMEDIATE GAIN
a deep poem of fate, resemble in faith; as it belong to human reason....what a beautiful write of the inner feeling of the One whom our faith believed the wonder of immortality....thank you for sharing, a great survival plan of our destiny.....a 10 +
Imagination and the final insight are really good ...10
Bad farming practises have eroded many hectares of land, top soil fllows down our rivers to be deposited in the oceans. You are so right we should stick to Gods plan. Bob 10++
Point well written, in a form and meaning anyone can understand. Brevity is not lacking in this, and though serious in nature, can be thought of as 'joke is on you! ' Excellent! xxxElys
Stolen, but, stolen well. A stolen treat maybe but now revealed for the benefit of all. Thanks for sharing the treasure with us. Angel
wonderful descriptive realistical poem, very well written and an excellent message..........10++++++++++
A strong, faithful message..Power.. Through a story..10++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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a gud opinion......very nicely written and paragraphed..........10