A Sunset By A Lake-Side (Alternate Rhyming) Poem by Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary

A Sunset By A Lake-Side (Alternate Rhyming)

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The golden coat in the sky
Turned the rest so dark,
When reflected in the water
The lake was ignited with sparks.

Within the magical shades,
The brightest shining object
Started immerging slowly,
And gave an eye enchanting effect.

Light was diminishing,
The trees turned into shadows.
A cool breeze started from the lake
Doves disappeared from the meadows.

Chirping of the returning birds
Announced the end of the day,
To bring another morning,
The sun had to set today.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dannnielle Bratt 22 May 2008

I really like the way that this peom flowed you are so gifted in your writing you should defently be an author

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Subbaraman N V 29 March 2008

Beautiful presentation of the routine!

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Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary

Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary

Madhubani, Bihar, India
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