. A Sucker For Love (Dark) Poem by Eyan Desir

. A Sucker For Love (Dark)

Rating: 3.1


From winter freeze
To summer heat
The fire still rages
Am I captured by love?
Keys to her heart

Will not open
But open for others!
Sweet thoughts comes to light
Throughout the night

When dawn comes near
My mind will clear
While reality creeps back


She will not be my flower in bed!
Since she is a loyal angel
Clouds of hatred cover my heart


Because she will never be mine!
But her thoughts always float on my mind
Cupid send me the bloody keys to her heart!


Time flows whiles ashes blows
Through summer heat
To winter frezee
Still the fire burns inside



All rights E.Desir 26 Sept 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramin Chaman 03 October 2009

A nice poem..and sweet..and a little a sad sight.

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The Lost.. 03 October 2009

nice poem, happy to read it and thanks for the invitation :)

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* Stephen *king 03 October 2009

The good poem eyan...............keep up the good work..........but one must not be bittter in love..

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Obinna Eruchie 03 October 2009

'From winter freeze / To summer heat / The fire still rages / Am I captured by love? / Keys to her heart / Will not open / But open for others! / Sweet thoughts comes to light / Throughout the night...', touching lines.

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Lynn Glover 03 October 2009

Good poem, Eyan, lost love, very good write. thanks for the invite. lynn

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Cynthia renee 22 November 2009

wow you use unbelievably beautiful language in your poetry.....its amazing

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wow....i have no words..good job...my eyan..

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 11 October 2009

Love, the elusive thing! Well done

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Last hakkaobake 10 October 2009

there are word that can never be spoken in the wake of your poems but we who comment on them try the best we can. cold frost or summers heat, our souls alone we can not complete. thanks as all ways for a great read.10

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Catrina Heart 08 October 2009

we all a sucker of love indeed, since all human beings need to love and be love. Poignant it is yet you have made a powerful poem, dark for your chosen words......Love truly is a mystery, we dont know sometimes the key to one's heart..... sometimes we think so hard yet the answer is just simple how to melt the frozen locked heart...you are doing great my friend........loved your poem! ! ! I wonder who is the lucky woman who have captured ur heart? ? ? 10s

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