A Striking Pose Poem by Tom J. Mariani

A Striking Pose



There is a a distinct difference
Between her moderately made-up face
Glancing away and her stark white ankles
Flashing at me

Sock-less
Above black canvas shoes
And just below
Fashionable black pant cuffs

It's like that face
Does not match the person
That is using those ankles
To stand near my table

I realize that the sun's rays
Are partly to blame for the difference
The ankles have avoided exposure
To untra-violet rays and attempted remedies

Of makeup
Moisturizers
Modern exfoliation
Waxing and peels

To what end
What drew my attention
Her face or her ankles
Or the contrast

Addmittedly her face is attractive
What caught my eye
The difference
Striking

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 10 January 2008

Amusing in a way and captivating. Wanted to read until the end to find out what happens. Ankles are rather revealing and can tell a lot about a person. They often reveal how physically active a woman is. At least that is my observation. Great detail and meaningful observation.

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Tom J. Mariani

Tom J. Mariani

San Francisco, CA
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