A Strange Dream Poem by Y Sunita Devi
A Strange Dream
Palpitating was I on my bed,
Experiencing a strange deep pain,
Unknown to me before,
A strange feeling of leaving everything!
With the sudden rush of the sweet fragrance of rose,
I remember the day when rose was presented as the heartiest gift,
Still faintly I can hold myself,
As if something superior power is carrying me,
Away from myself and from my dearest world!
My struggle was insignificant,
As the pursuer was stronger than me in all ways,
His demeanor was cold,
Taking me away with an iron mind!
Unable was I made,
To resist Him in his Endeavour,
Gaping on my bed still,
I was trying to escape from His strong hold!
Still struggling and gaping,
A gentle sisterly touch gave a sudden jerk,
The sudden soft touch brought me back,
Back to the world of my dearest beings!
Relieved though,
To be back to my world,
Still was in an stupor,
Realizing how much I held my world to my heart! ! !
Relieved though, To be back to my world, Still was in an stupor, Realizing how much I held my world to my heart! ! ! dreams are not real but still they are so close to our chest. sometimes taking us to its logical conclusionthhought not enter in our life really....10 read mine..pulled from deep sleep.....o lord.... dreams not come true
Relieved though, To be back to my world, Still was in an stupor, Realizing how much I held my world to my heart! ! ! dreams are always strange but the you gone through is wonderful and ipressive in poem for and i agree with your conclusion up..10++++++++++++
Very original and thought-provoking and really Dreamy.Thanks for sharing your work.10 Best wishes. A.
best of your best winnie.........creativity and poetic rhyme dances in your lines.........the 4th and 5th para was simply awesome....te way yu kept the one who tried to pursue yu... secret, till te end was adorable...............10+ sebastine
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4/25/2024 2:52:14 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Wow this is neat! ! I like it so much.. You wrote this very nicely.. KRISTA