*** A Story Untold Yet *** Poem by Dr subhendu kar

*** A Story Untold Yet ***

Rating: 3.5


there lie many a rungs of colors
the ascension yet onto the moon
on the strands of love blustering
clouds when all around intoning blue

flower blooms from the bud as the law
fragrance diffuses into the air betiding
tunes flow on the rune of passion
at times storm inevitable on the milieu
in its own way clock when stays back

the strong wind thrusts on lazing tears
cuckoo no more sings the song of autumn
rumpus lays its icy hand by the mystery
rumpling the gloss into a rigid frame of fire

tide loses its dream from the core of desire
as the web of sands redoubts the splash
vale of tunes seems to be rocked up
the lightening splashes the fire in eyes

legion’s street at criss-cross rucks up
i simply speechless behold the stream
meandering rueful across the snowfall
in furrows of love and hate yet undespised

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thad Wilk 07 June 2008

A capturing poem and story, poignant and thought provoking! *10*! ! Best regards Dr. Kar! Friend Thad

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Nkululeko Mdudu 10 June 2008

A truly inspirering and captivating story, showing grace in poetic style. thanks

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Sarwar Chowdhury 17 August 2008

...a truely poetic composition......10

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 14 June 2008

a beautiful poetry relating life and nature nicely written

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Vidi Writes 13 June 2008

Zest of life, being in love Caught in a cool breeze Or an untimely shower. Is there something lost in a fire frame? What about those tune of desires rocked up? So is it the confusion about love and hate? Dear poet, this love-hate relation Mostly yeild an untold story. You made me thinking and thinking... Enjoyed the sense of that 'Untold'. Thank you.

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Catherine Rica Cosico 13 June 2008

Deep thoughts to ponder with...story untold yet, heritage will bring our name to life and remain in their hearts forever for thats the seed we planted during our times

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Sandra Fowler 10 June 2008

Excellent use of imagery and metaphor. Our story is indeed untold as yet. But each new day is a gift and well worth living. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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