survi sharma


A Story - Poem by survi sharma

my legs will be broken
never would be my dream
and let me clear, though a girl
i never let me slip on the cream.

let me say, this world, 'hello'
my agony never knows a way
i am peeping through the glass
whether it is night or a day.

however, sweetness tell my mom
and my dad, who is in London,
my friends make me laugh heartly
never going to leave them, such cruelity!

i have a piece of ear rings
that i have never used till now
i avoid using it, many reasons,
as looking, boys cries, 'wow'

i have a short and simple story
that i am among the talents
and this will eventually bring near,
my destiny, when being a successful engineer.


Comments about A Story by survi sharma

  • Rookie Nirmal Upadhyaya (1/7/2014 3:39:00 AM)

    nice attempt. story telling is not so easy in poetry. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (6/28/2013 7:42:00 AM)

    Another beautifully written gem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 175 Points Vizard Dhawan (6/26/2013 12:50:00 AM)

    nice story cum poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ..... W@king Up..... (6/25/2013 2:09:00 AM)

    A great story :) the story of your life, perhaps? It certainly seems to be the story of mine. Nice work :)

    -W (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Jenie Franksay (6/24/2013 7:05:00 AM)

    good 1... strong and impressive. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 327 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (6/22/2013 7:30:00 AM)

    To be simple is a bliss.See our Defense Minister Mr.AK Antony, he never uses a watch.He uses simple dress.So, what? Be rational, Critically thinking.Read News papers and Magazines of different kinds. Observe people of different category and their life on your way.Your grace will inspire you to write well and neglect frowns and criticisms. Expect your confident poems of rhythm and rhythm. Practice some nursey rhymes(as a mould) to get a flow to poems. This story is very appealing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,391 Points Hazel Durham (6/22/2013 6:44:00 AM)

    Your on the threshold of all your dreams coming true with such sweetness and a powerful outlook on life!
    Love the lines........I am peeping through the glass
    whether it is night or day. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Simran Arora (6/22/2013 4:41:00 AM)

    :) :) :) :) :) .....
    Nicely explnd... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kelly Seale (6/22/2013 4:02:00 AM)

    Golden flower set to bloom, your time is near, your time is soon. You will go far young lady. Great Write! ; -) Kelly. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 135 Points Indranil Bhaduri (6/22/2013 3:23:00 AM)

    Beautifully written..thoughts of a girl..or a woman... beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Parikshit Naidu (6/22/2013 2:54:00 AM)

    ambitious and creative.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 22, 2013


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