A Stepping Stone Poem by Alfred Ramos

A Stepping Stone

Rating: 5.0


Crossing the riverbed alone
The incompleteness of a dream
Pushes him forward
His head lifted towards the sky
The hot sun blindly leads
A memory profusely bleeds
From every single pore
Seeking the elusive stepping stone
On the rooted banks
On the edge of humanity
Reality seeks to savor a path
With no limitations or wrath
In a mirage
He sees his reflection
He sees a distortion
From the ripples of his life
Spinning him in circles
A whirlwind
Rearranges his thoughts
Expanding his subtle thirst
To hopscotch across a stepping stone
That will lead him to a ravaged garden
Of forbidden fruit
Back to the beginning of eternity
Pleading the simple life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Atina 16 November 2008

This poem flowed from an inspired place. Superbly moulded. A 10 from me!

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Alfred Ramos

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