********* ((((((A Start Of A Night)))))) ********** Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

********* ((((((A Start Of A Night)))))) **********

Rating: 2.2


The nights announce it's rights
to the mirrors it complain me...

tonight i decided to be...
tonight I return me to me
let us contemplate our night
be the mirrors, spend a heartfelt night with me

waiting no more
for the hopes, for closed doors
to the mirrors the waiting complain me

tonight a little heart will take
that is the time to give me

the waiting apologize to me....

to be cont.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Almedia Knight-Oliver 19 March 2010

'Tonight I return to me' I'm delighted that you return to me, too. Now, stay with me, I have another birthday next month...LOL

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Meggie Gultiano 19 March 2010

a nice piece...thanks for sharing

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Sadiqullah Khan 19 March 2010

Yet this is the start, the melodic beginning and the dialogue with the mirror. We will see it unfolding but we have known that the bass has been set well. Some thing of a superlative degree is created by you which is terribly voluptuous.10++

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