! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A Spinning Top- Haiku! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A Spinning Top- Haiku! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 2.7


Spins with abandon,
It whirs, whirs and then slows down,
To lie quiet on its side.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 26 September 2009

a fascinating game we have...

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Rachel Butler 10 October 2009

It whirs, whirs and then slows down, Rachel Ann Butler

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Rakesh Bedi 06 October 2009

mamta, after reading it two times, my mind could equate it with humans. See, from the momemt of birth onwards, we continue spinning, making various voices/noises till we btreathe our last and lie down quietly n motionless.... a nice simily with the spinning top, i would say.....

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Vidi Writes 04 October 2009

Doctrines of yester years If anyone says… still relevant Then see how it spins… And at last….

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Sandra Fowler 01 October 2009

Very mesmerizing while it lasts. Something very poignant about this one.10, for the depth of your feelings. Warm wishes, Sandra

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Kesav Easwaran 27 September 2009

life...very symbolic...thanks...10

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