A Special Day Poem by Abdullah Musa

A Special Day



The Sun was smiling
The Stars were twinkling and staring
The Moon was laughing
Candles flamed gold
Angels praising and
aroma from heaven
Hope was hymning
Flowers swaying to the rhythm
From heaven
the vault of bliss was opened
Immortals moving mountains
and
Mortals celebrating
Rivers gushed milk and honey for heros and heroines
Tears nourished the earth
finally
Freedom lit our heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chase Breeden 21 January 2010

I understand he emotion in this poem very well. It's an intriguing poem. Leave me some feedback on a few of mine if you will. Thanks

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The Lost.. 18 January 2010

this is very nice Abdulla..keep writing and hope u the best in ur life.

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samkelisiwe makhubu 02 March 2018

wow; this poem is so amazing, i really bet that u have a great talent i am from memel primary school, g7.mr du toit school.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 06 February 2012

Simple brilliant man, beautiful poem my friend.

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Danielle Ducote 30 January 2010

Beautifully Written. U have so much emotion in your writing.. I loved it..

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Beka ? ? ? 21 January 2010

nice it was shiny =)

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Mae Bonnin 21 January 2010

I like this alot. You bring out many aspects of a special day of going to heaven. You have a good grasp on this idea and vision. This is a lovely and remarkable poem. Any feedback on my poems will be appreciated as well.

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