Jacques Sprenkie Mateya

Rookie (September / Dennilton)

A Sour Day


Singing a silent song in language of ernegy
It comes out shy
Look! At it braches
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  • Veteran Poet - 4,818 Points Savita Tyagi (7/16/2014 8:21:00 AM)

    Your words have power to touch soul. Great poem. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 773 Points Leslie Philibert (7/16/2013 4:28:00 AM)

    Fantastic poem that I like very much! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 773 Points Leslie Philibert (7/16/2013 4:27:00 AM)

    a good poem that needs a edit..ernegy is a typo, and the syntax needs some work, e.g.
    God came down to our rescue, words like Corpse need an article You write well, keep working! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 340 Points Captain Cur (7/16/2012 2:59:00 PM)

    Enemy is Government of a day,
    great line, depicting the brutality
    of some regimes.
    Good work, keep writing about subjects
    that inflame your passions. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Romeo Della Valle (4/1/2012 2:43:00 PM)

    Wow! What a deep, well crafted and thought provoking write that clearly shows your potential in the Poetry World! 10+++ WELCOME! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! Keep giving the World more of your powerful works! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! (Report) Reply

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