Treasure Island

nasibeh Daneshvar


A SONNET


I sing a sonnet for you,
to immortalize my love,
I sing a sonnet for you,
such ethereality as further memories,
such pureness as youth sights,
such beauty as smile's meaning,
I sing a sonnet for you,
to tell my infinite love after years,
may tomorrow be late,
I sing a sonnet for you...

Submitted: Saturday, February 04, 2006

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  • Jake Erkens (3/15/2009 11:02:00 PM)

    Whoa! Hey there, do you even know what a sonnet is?
    I am also in a poetry class like Jack Miller, and I am also
    only 15 years of age. This is just weird, entitling a poem
    'sonnet' when it is not a sonnet. sorry, but I don't like it.
    However, I have read through your other poems and think
    that they are okay, and some are great.

    sincerely,
    Davke (Report) Reply

  • Albert Wong (9/27/2008 12:55:00 AM)

    Elya Thorn, yes you are right, it is not a sonnet, because there are not enough 14 lines and without rhymes sounds in styles of Petrarchan or Shakespeare...cd, cd, cd; cdc, cdc, or cde, cde...so it is absolutely not a sonnet. But, I know you can write sonnets because there are so many in your site found...I appreciate for your poem very much..thank you for share. (Report) Reply

  • Jack Miller (3/6/2008 7:20:00 PM)

    I am sorry to tell you that this is not a sonnet. I am only 15 and im in a poetry class. Yes i did enjoy the poem but no its not a sonnet. A sonnet must be 14 lines. (Report) Reply

  • Elya Thorn (2/4/2006 7:20:00 PM)

    Wow, this has such a romantic kick into it that I so much enjoy. A great poem!

    ~~Elya Thorn~~ (Report) Reply

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