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Nasarudheen.P. Parameswaran

Rookie - 203 Points (8.8.1952 / Manakad)

A Song on Krishna


(in Adi thal: common time rhythm)
Krisna….Krisna…..Kris….na…..
In vicious age Thou incarnate by Mercy
Oh! Lord save us, save us from sadness. [3]

In prayer we seek Thy blessing Krisna…,
By modern Gita please enervate us Krisna
Shower on Thy Graceful glances and bless us
Oh! Lord Krisna , dance on the vice hoods. [Krisna…]

Oh! Lord, guide our chariot by counsels
Let our languish be swept off, Krishna.[Krisna….sadness]
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Note: [Next day is “Ashtami Rohini, the birth day of Lord Krishna according to the followers of Vaishnava cult in Hinduism in India. It is an attempt to make a new genre of Poem in English as any language is of sounds and music. It is my supplication to the Lord. Krisna is the spelling used for Krishna by Dr.Radhakrishnan.S. in his Bhagavad Gita, dedicated to Mahatma Gandhi Gita is the book of advice given to Arjuna just before the Mahabharata War to instigate him dance...hood: it is the symbol of struggle against vices: Kaliya Mardana-killing of Kaliya/vices in society. This song may be sung to incite the cells].

Submitted: Tuesday, August 27, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, August 28, 2013

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Hitesh Sharma (10/8/2013 3:47:00 AM)

    Who really knows, and who can swear,
    How creation came, when or where!
    Even gods came after creation's day,
    Who really knows, who can truly say?
    When and how did the creation start?
    Did He will it? Or did He not?
    Only He, up there, knows, maybe;
    Or perhaps, not even He.
    ~ Rig Veda 10: 129

    your poem may have touched HIS heart also, must say... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,424 Points Somanathan Iyer (8/28/2013 11:13:00 AM)

    The gist is simple yet powerful. Yes our spirits will be enlivened in the true musical form. Nice write. (Report) Reply

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