A Son's Lament Poem by T.James Becker

A Son's Lament

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Sitting in the hospital waiting room
Atmosphere filled with pain and gloom
Weeping inside those invisible tears
A torrent of emotions mostly of fear

Looking around I see concern in sad eyes
Waiting patiently for the doctors apprise
When he arrives my knees feel weak
Voice has been stolen I can no longer speak

He slowly walks over there’s a buzz in my head
Difficult to focus on the words that he said
Six months to a year and she’ll be gone
It’s inconceivable he has to be wrong

As if by detonation my heart explodes
Thousands of demons on me are bestowed
If prayers are the answer a million are sent
My shouts can be heard a son’s pitiful lament

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 16 November 2008

Rhythym and rhyme are well coined. flow is good. emotion well expressed. you are a born poet

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Ron Flowers 15 November 2008

Very beautifully said, T James, so sad, so full of emotion. God be with you Ron

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 14 November 2008

Its heart-wrenching poem......my friend. Expressed with a simple eloquence that actually accentuates the agony....

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Sylvia Feeley 13 November 2008

My prayers are with you. Excellent work.

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Stacey Watts 12 November 2008

Oh wow very powerful and sad. What a heard ordeal to be faced with losing a loved one. I am so Sorry...

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