A Solitary Walk Poem by Rebekah Gamble

A Solitary Walk

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I walked the shore one lonesome night;
a shore so far from your embrace.
I heard the waves lap at the shore
and heard the voice of the sweetly singing sea.
How dark it was; as my world always is
when you are not near to me.
What narrow beam of hallowed light
shown forth from the silent moon!
It comforted me in my despairing solitude
as I knew you may have been looking
at that self-same sky, that self-same moon.
How ancient her comfort is!
How ancient the concept of parted lovers!
I left but a single set
of impressions in the sand,
washing away with the lapping waves.
A solitary set of prints for a solitary heart,
quiet in it's dark encasement;
quiet in desperation for the sound
of singing angels in heaven,
known only to me as your voice!
I walked the shore one lonesome night;
with my eyes dry as the desert,
as they had forgotten how to cry.
In the darkness I could have not been alone,
but garish day had begun to break,
exposing my solitary walk
without the companion of my heart.
I stood and watched as the waves took the prints of my walk,
and saw that no wave could take your prints
left on my heart.

23 February 2oo8

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Farouq Ali 19 August 2008

nicely done! ! keep writin..

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Flávio Bhawk 05 May 2008

I loved this one, I could imagine the scenes while I was reading, beautiful write! I liked specially the last part: 'I stood and watched as the waves took the prints of my walk, and saw that no wave could take your prints left on my heart.' It's just... just... great! That's how I'm feeling right now, this goes to my favorites. Keep writing =D

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 03 March 2008

walk the solitary write....and you' ll prevailed.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 23 February 2008

A very nice poem, meaningful, provoking! Thanks! LC

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Rebekah Gamble

Rebekah Gamble

Pittsburgh, Penna., U.S.A.
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