A Simple Truth Poem by Malaya Roses

A Simple Truth

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Ready to meet me
A simple truth
In this simple life
But complicated in risk
Reaching the end
Could not find the stoppage
Without unpaged the fallen
Unwrapped the victorious
Flow of the breathing mind
Invoke more than faith
Believe
The One will be there
To do justice
To serve justice! ! !

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Manolo Del Toro 25 May 2012

I don't get it, or understand it. please explain.

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Hans Vr 25 March 2012

Dear Rose, Superficially it may seem that here on earth, the good are suffering and the bad are having a good time. But somehow, somewhere, I believe that this is only superficially. I feel that at a deeper level, justice is done, here and now, for all we do. When we perform some real unselfish kindness, it gets rewarded immediately with a mega, no giga dose of peace of mind. It will attract people in our lives who are kind also and if we are in need we will be helped as well. This peace of mind and ease may well last into eternity. If we tell a lie or make someone suffer, it somehow wrings a part deep inside of us. superficially we may seem to enjoy the victory or the financial gains but deep insde we are unhappy and feel bad. We will mix with and attract people with siimilar ethics of cheating and deceiving and when we need help we may not get it. The wrings inside may well last into eternity. Every single day we can make a difference in this world. It is often within our choice whether the difference is positive or negative. I am not too sure about all the above. Many things still happen that we do not understand (as stated in my poem, Y... the story of why) . Wow Rose, my comment is getting really to long. What a very thought provoking poem you have written. Very well done.

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