*** A Simple Promise Poem by Marci Made

*** A Simple Promise

Rating: 3.2


As long as I can breathe
As long as I am Me
As long as I can feel
As long as day still turns to night
As long as life remains in flux
As long as stars and the moon shine bright
As long as I can love
I will be here for you
A true forever, loving friend..
No matter what the cost.

July 11,2008.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Harris 22 August 2009

Marci, I loved this simple promise. You have lost none of your flair for putting things as they are. Top marks and thanks for sharing this my friend. Hugs David

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Amber Lamb 15 July 2008

A simple promise of the greatest kind. I saw my best friends faces while reading, thanks for that

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... and of course the best things in life are free. Meg, this is humbling and touching. t x

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Who Iam 12 July 2008

What a beautiful 'Promise'. The simplistics of each phrase holds so much meaning for your friend. I look every day for your writes; this one has renewed something I feared was lost. I'am humbled and grateful... dear lady.

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Trade Martin 12 July 2008

Very nice Meg....! ! ! Keep up the fine work. Regards, Trade.

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