A Short Verse Poem by louis rams

A Short Verse

Rating: 5.0


stillborn
reborn
wife dying
child crying

faith is all this world has left
so let us put it to the test

escape from the flaming hell
mother and child are doing well.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eddie Roa 24 February 2009

A truth well told. excellent write.

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Indira Renganathan 05 June 2009

Quite insightful giving a faithful approach to life....thanks for sharing

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Kesav Easwaran 27 April 2009

i love this write as a whole...a short verse going long in its insight...and far in its meaning...10

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I love the first lines its great Krista

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Vaibhav Pandey 25 February 2009

Short but satuated with intelligence.

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Sandra Fowler 25 February 2009

You have found your poetic voice in this one.10, of course. Warm regards, Sandra

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