A Shadow Nightmare Poem by Kishor Pathak

A Shadow Nightmare

Rating: 4.8


In the middle of chilly dark night
Lost in vicinity of darkness
Earnestly waiting for a dawn
I saw someone at my back
Creating a trap, not letting me slack

As I moved it just followed
I wasn't set to be swallowed
Notion of fear ran through me
Terror was building sec by sec
Body seemed leaving step by step

Clutched mind made no sense
Eavesdropping got me more tensed
Out of fence were my eyes
Pounding heart was no surprise

Forehead burned with running sweat
Stomach churned in furious threat
Frozen hands shivered like never
Legs rolled faster than ever

I was terrified sensing the weird
It was getting closer and near
Carefully I moved ignoring the sight
Getting no chance to linger at night

A nearby hut looked fit to hid
I made hurry and went beneath it
For a sec I thought it left
As it showed up I got vexed

Hoping for help I took a turn
There too it came making me run
As we grappled I felt dead
It was a scene I never met

I made a weapon out of broken desk
Pointing to him with buckle and beck
Inquired the hostile who are you?
Zesty was an answer, I'm just you…

I leaped off sleep amid of night
Sensing the dawn ready to arrive
Then I realized it was a shadow
Friend of all the time not a foe

Tracing us all over from the below
Whether it's dark night or a milky snow
It sticks with you and never let you go
It's a magnetic comrade please don't mow

I could just laugh with smile on face
Shadow was scary throughout the race
Only moon's outer rays saw that scene
It was a shadow nightmare entirely unseen

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The poem is about a boy lost somewhere in the tar dark night and is waiting for a dawn. He finds someone tracing him everywhere he goes. He gets scared and tries out all possibilities to get out of it finally taking the weapon to protect himself from the evil which ultimately turns out to be his own shadow in nightmare and not foe.

They are many things in the world which can be controlled and be thrown off, but shadow is something which can't be turned down. We may intend putting umpteen efforts to get rid of it but all will turn futile. Only the Almighty can do it and that too after bifurcation of soul from a body. Shadow is predominant and if we refuse to accept it, then we are not only headed for failure but also for misery and unhappiness.

It plays an important role in life, saves us from self-righteousness and helps us understand the enigma of unfairness in the lives of others. It makes us trust in our own forte and put all our hopes and believes in the power of one self.

Apostles and greatest of saints experienced their shadows and pleaded lord to remove it but all went in vain. Ultimately they accepted it and became invincible. Don't get panic if you have become discouraged or depressed because every time you turn around you see your shadow. God knows our pity and hence he has given us a perfect comrade, so that we're always accompanied in evil situations and protected. Shadow is God's grace and a perfect companion in loneliness. So let's be contented with weaknesses, insults, hardships because if we are weak, then we're actually heading towards being mighty.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 05 January 2013

A tense, dark and very atmospheric poem so beautifully written! We all have a dark side it's part of being human if we embrace our faults and with God's help we can overcome anything! Excellent write!

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Kishor Pathak 07 January 2013

Thank you all for spending your precious time and acknowledging the work.

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Payal Parande 05 January 2013

a story that tell the true meaning of fear and give a morel.....brilliant sir the words are like knife yet they are gentle too bravo indeed

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Vikrant Jog 05 January 2013

Dude, Excellent though. This shows the thing we fear is our own terror. Good write. Keep it up

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Jahan Zeb 05 January 2013

very nicely narrated Kishore. You created the scene nicely. I liked the title as well. Sure, You have got talent and will write for us more. I liked the ending.

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Gajanan Mishra 05 January 2013

Shadow nightmare. thanks for the poem. good one.

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Kishor Pathak

Kishor Pathak

Nagpur, Maharashtra, India
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