**a Seed Of Awarrior Poet..Updated One Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

**a Seed Of Awarrior Poet..Updated One

Rating: 3.2


(A prose which was written few months back)
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(for some of my friends whom I lost sadly today) .....
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for those whom are SO holy in my mind,


I steal from my thoughts few thoughts,

for whom called warriors and poets....

those who create

from the end start, from the failure success..

whom they have so odd stories, filled by

pain and long ways of trials,

their aching souls witnessed many traps...

they never stop despite the stabs


their success is the journey... the taste

of that rest after

walking the long hectic ways..the rest of the

bleeding feet..the taste of

admireres whom with them so long
differ...



the demolishing which build in them

a tower.

the pure feeling which born from a

suffer,

the deep vision, the wisdom which heal and recover


Warriors and poets.. do talk while

they walk..they do not sit or rest,

chairs are created for the guests but not for the

hosts..



.. that day found my self standing again and alone,

that moment only i felt again free..so

happy i was

soaring and realized that i'm a seed of a

warrior..perhaps i'm a seed of a poet

I walked my long way again once again to

start again, at the end i sang for the

freedom...my freedom from that

chair.. it was a few

moments after my success

which can be considered as a failure by

others

that day....
one girl said to me..you are a fish and have been thrown to sea

but that sea rejected me when discovered that i'm not a fish but another sea

what a beauty, what a greatness when you belong to you, when no one own you, when your soul stay always soaring when your soul stay free

free..free..free

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 21 July 2009

perfect..a new subject with rich and meanigful way writeen poem.. i really liked it much..well done..10/10

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 22 July 2009

Losing friends is one of the most bad part but it's a part of life that we try to not happen. But after all these things, we learn and learn. Your poem is good!

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Sadiqullah Khan 23 July 2009

Sad, you lost all your poets friends in a day, it scares me madame I will give you 10 marks for your poem.

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Rafique Farooqi 26 July 2009

Sad but very impressive write, ........

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Louis Rams 22 August 2009

the soul is something that only you and GOD control. it will take you to places beyond your wildest dreams of things seen and unseen. as for the question. you are the seed from both the poet and the warrior. the strength from the warrior and the beauty of the poet. GOD BLESS

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Heather Wilkins 12 August 2013

warriors and poets do talk while they walk they do no sit or rest they do not have time to rest their mind is too busy. like this

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Sadiqullah Khan 19 March 2010

This is not easy doing, there is a cause here, a pain, much beyond one; s own life. When things go that way, the mind thinks differently. This is so real. Your expression can carry ones emotions.10

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Rafique Farooqi 08 November 2009

very well written it touched my heart and mind

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* Naphright * 28 October 2009

i totally can relate, you go girl

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Adens Kamwi 18 October 2009

struggled to find the true meaning behind it, but when i did i loved it.. :)

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