A Scene From A Movie Made In 1962 Poem by Moonchild Diva

A Scene From A Movie Made In 1962

Rating: 5.0


Penthouse apartment, city lights, lamps on low,
click of a Zippo, cigarette smoke,
invitation to a party slipped under the door,
let’s not go.

Party dress zipper, heels across the floor,
perfume, a fter shave, cigarette smoke,
Full Moon out the window, keys to the door,
let’s not go.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 05 November 2008

tight, neat. Exciting. frequency of the cigarette smoke with a parallel-placing of nouns compose the imagery, make the scene in this nugget of a piece. I'm enjoying your work, Moonchild. keep on, sjg

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