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Yehoshua Shim'onai

Rookie - 168 Points (Sept.12,1993 / Angono, Rizal)

A Salvation Story (Part I & II)


I.
Once I saw myself sitting on my castle‘s throne -
In my heart’s realm, lording over my life alone –
Reigned in a kingdom which’s only a n illusion,
King of the self of mine but the slave of my own!

I slumbered from the truth – I’m only a captive!
Slave of pride, in prison of my ego I live
Being a slave of this throne, I am so passive;
I’m bound on this filthy castle and I can’t leave!

This is not a castle at all but a dungeon!
In this castle of my life I am imprisoned -
Feeling like a king of my own failing reason,
But blinded by my painful hallucination!

II.
To a sinful life I’ve sold myself like a slave
And being naïve went to the Prison of Grave;
From my unrighteousness, myself I can’t save;
From the Lord’s holiness, I’m totally deprived!

His wrath was upon me, for I was a sinner
His judgment’s ‘gainst me, for I was a dirt-bearer
His glory’s withdrawn from me, being transgressor
For my sin, I was sep’rated from the Master!

So I cried freedom to the Lord of Creation
And to the God Almighty, I cried redemption;
From my sinful living, I asked for salvation,
That He may deliver me from my transgressions!

Submitted: Sunday, April 24, 2011
Edited: Monday, January 02, 2012

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Mohammad Akmal Nazir (4/24/2011 5:48:00 AM)

    Liked the poem which is full of pathetic feelings.
    Great imagery and beautiful style.
    Nice write.
    Thanks for sharing......
    Please read my new poems. (Report) Reply

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