~~~a Rose Bloomed In My Hands~~ Poem by Kolitha Lelwala

That's so sweet and very beautiful.

A very nice poem reflecting a factual experience of child birth which is indeed a very joyious moment for a mother as well as for a doctor.You have shown the whole picture of a step by step delievery process in some really fine verses. The ending of the poem depicts the beauty of a newborn and by using the simli of a blooming rose, you have made it worth reading.

Captured one of life's most natural feats so naturally.

My favorite poem of yours!

h yeah.. Slowly push Lovely… Petals unveiled Clamped the chord… Suspended her from the feet beautiful description of a wonderful birth and your helping hands. and finally the comment A rose bloomed.. sooo nice.

I really like your poem. You have portrayed a joyous moment in a very delicate way. Its simply a great work. Best wishes.

Well expressed.I love this poem.You've portrayed a nice image.I love dthese lines. Cutie birdie started chirping Darling you’ve got a little daughter She is very healthy. A Rose bloomed in my hands' Beautiful flow write.10 for content.

'|Cutie birdie started chirping Darling you’ve got a little daughter She is very healthy. A Rose bloomed in my hands' lovely words sir..liked it very much..nice poetic expressions too...enjoyed it very much thanks best wishes shan

Praiseworthy! When I see this lovely poem I think of Dr.Che Guvera...... of his untimely death?