*a Rose Poem by Lillian Jamison

*a Rose

Rating: 3.2


A woman is like a rose
Her petals soft and fragrant
If she is cared for with loving tenderness
In life and love she shall bloom

A true woman is beauty
For all who see to recognize
How she stands out from the other flowers
With all that she has to offer

A rose needs special care
A place of importance
In that special crystal vase
To be delicately looked upon

Both a woman and a rose
Offer beauty and softness

A rose requires cool water
Freshly cut stems
Just the right amount of light
And its gift of beauty shines

All that a true woman requires
Is love and importance
Admiration and above all consideration
For how a man's actions affect the beauty

The beauty of a woman as a rose

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Your Thoughts 05 January 2010

not bad its pretty good

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fleur de lys 05 January 2010

The sentiments contained in this are perfection.

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Romeo Della Valle 05 January 2010

Wow, Lillian, what a beautiful way to put things in perspective, like you did from a woman's point of view, me as man, I always think that way...Check my poems and you will see with transparency how I really feel about women! You really got a well penned poem, straight from the heart, you are great, keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace...

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