A Road Tore Apart Poem by Moushumi moushumi

A Road Tore Apart

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A Road Tore Apart



They walked together for a while,
They walked alone a mile,
Each of them promised to meet…
Each of them…

I looked behind every
Step with eager.

I look behind at other.

Are they looking at one?
Are they waiting to see?
Are they...
As many miles like this...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Js Black 06 January 2009

Whether together or alone....life is a journey! Great job...Jeff.

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Kesav Easwaran 28 July 2008

a lovely write this...sweetly painfully piercing the mind...those two selective words- together and alone- stand apart head high in this beautiful write...vote ten miles...

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Subbaraman N V 13 July 2008

That we do experience in life! a good write!

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