A Rhyme Poem by Scarlett Outlaw

A Rhyme



Santa Clause loves a bit of banter
he goes on a horse and tells it go and canter
He loves himself,
he flicks his hair,
he is always up for a dare.

He has ties that are cool,
he thinks that he makes all of the girls drool.
He is extremely reem
and goes fishing for bream.

He is living the dream,
he makes girls fall for his looks
People should understand
he is a legend.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My friend told me to write this - so be as critical as possible! ! :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Asif Andalib 22 November 2012

Lovely write on Santa. However I have a suggetion you can rewrite the last stanza as given below He is living the dream, Girls think he is icecream He loves each and everyone he is a legend for fun.

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Anita Sehgal 22 November 2012

a good one for santa.. enjoyed

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